Yet another story of mine, published on Adbhut. Ah, Dinker, I don't know what I'd do without you :)
On a more serious note, this particular story is an entirely new direction for me. It's a subject I've never attempted before, and as far as I know it hasn't been taken up by anyone else in English, either. Would appreciate comments.
4 comments:
Liked it - it was quite well-written. A small crib - I found the introduction of the narrator a little abrupt (perhaps I didn't read the preceding part properly), but it seemed to come out of the blue.
Excellent job Sud. Love the story and it kept me engrossed. Some points though : I do see too much desi-ization of terms. Like Ramu Kaka, and Bhai's.
Not sure if Ramu Kaka is the name given to every man-servant in india, though that does seem to be the trend in the movies of the 70s (read ramu kaka zara chai lana)
ur blog is awesome! someday i also dream of writing something meaningful!
linking you!
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