Friday, June 03, 2005

Yet another story of mine, published on Adbhut. Ah, Dinker, I don't know what I'd do without you :)

On a more serious note, this particular story is an entirely new direction for me. It's a subject I've never attempted before, and as far as I know it hasn't been taken up by anyone else in English, either. Would appreciate comments.

4 comments:

Ramanand said...

Liked it - it was quite well-written. A small crib - I found the introduction of the narrator a little abrupt (perhaps I didn't read the preceding part properly), but it seemed to come out of the blue.

Rajeev Sharma said...

Excellent job Sud. Love the story and it kept me engrossed. Some points though : I do see too much desi-ization of terms. Like Ramu Kaka, and Bhai's.

Not sure if Ramu Kaka is the name given to every man-servant in india, though that does seem to be the trend in the movies of the 70s (read ramu kaka zara chai lana)

Gypsy said...

ur blog is awesome! someday i also dream of writing something meaningful!

Gypsy said...

linking you!